Things you done well: - Consistent colour scheme - Layout enables easier understanding of the text - Title of the contents page is attractive, and persuasive to read on. Improvements: - Images need more consideration; little bit small - Reduce the amount of text used, only contain specific type of questions
I like the colours used as they are consistent. Great layout and easy to read. Pull quote used entices me.
Make some of her answers shorter. Move the additional images slightly to the left so they are not so close to your text. I think a larger picture of your main artist would have sufficed as this is commonly used
i think that the DPS is the best part of your magazine. it looks very detailed and has a lot of information making it look good and well thought out. i like the use of images giving the DPS more detail. to improve the DPS i would recommend using a bold masthead bringing attention to the page.
Things to improve on- I think you should have wrote less text as this may not be appealing to your rock audience. they would mainly want to see more images and a bit less wording
Apart from this, colour scheme is clear, layout is semi sophisticated and your masthead on the content is clear
Things you done well:
ReplyDelete- Consistent colour scheme
- Layout enables easier understanding of the text
- Title of the contents page is attractive, and persuasive to read on.
Improvements:
- Images need more consideration; little bit small
- Reduce the amount of text used, only contain specific type of questions
I like the colours used as they are consistent. Great layout and easy to read. Pull quote used entices me.
ReplyDeleteMake some of her answers shorter. Move the additional images slightly to the left so they are not so close to your text. I think a larger picture of your main artist would have sufficed as this is commonly used
i think that the DPS is the best part of your magazine. it looks very detailed and has a lot of information making it look good and well thought out. i like the use of images giving the DPS more detail. to improve the DPS i would recommend using a bold masthead bringing attention to the page.
ReplyDeleteThings to improve on- I think you should have wrote less text as this may not be appealing to your rock audience. they would mainly want to see more images and a bit less wording
ReplyDeleteApart from this, colour scheme is clear, layout is semi sophisticated and your masthead on the content is clear