1. you have covered everything in the magazine and it was well done. 2. you spoke in detail in the magazine and bought up some important points. - Do you have any concerns regarding my magazine? 3. I Have no concerns about the magazine, except how you would broader your magazine. 4. i would definitely buy this magazine and it would sell well.
It would be good to find out your reason into choosing the name of your magazine. it would also be nice to understand why your magazine is mainly aimed at white people. wouldn't it be advantageous to broaden your audience. apart from this, your presentation was well presented and you included the main things in your pitch. Just include your flat plan idea.
1. you have covered everything in the magazine and it was well done.
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- Do you have any concerns regarding my magazine?
3. I Have no concerns about the magazine, except how you would broader your magazine.
4. i would definitely buy this magazine and it would sell well.
It would be good to find out your reason into choosing the name of your magazine. it would also be nice to understand why your magazine is mainly aimed at white people. wouldn't it be advantageous to broaden your audience. apart from this, your presentation was well presented and you included the main things in your pitch. Just include your flat plan idea.
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